Good to see the first draft in on time! Here is some feedback to help you improve:
1. Good attention to detail in terms of mise en scene and costume for both images in your double page spread.
2. Good use of iconography of the metal genre.
3. Nice use of fonts, too.
4. Issue: you only have 3 original images that are obvious. I know you went to great pains to superimpose the face of your model into the pentagram and I think, knowing the genre you are going for, having a mostly graphic front cover works. My concern is , however authentic it may be, it may not fly with the examiners. You could get around this by either replacing the replicated thumbnail of the double page spread in the contents with another image that is clearly different to the others or replacing the image of the toy pirate with an image of the editor.
Good to see the first draft in on time! Here is some feedback to help you improve:
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2. Good use of iconography of the metal genre.
3. Nice use of fonts, too.
4. Issue: you only have 3 original images that are obvious. I know you went to great pains to superimpose the face of your model into the pentagram and I think, knowing the genre you are going for, having a mostly graphic front cover works. My concern is , however authentic it may be, it may not fly with the examiners. You could get around this by either replacing the replicated thumbnail of the double page spread in the contents with another image that is clearly different to the others or replacing the image of the toy pirate with an image of the editor.